The first thing I did was brainstorm of ideas and reasons public transportation is not good in Paraguay . After this I did a rough draft of that essay with all the reasons and references and then I did final draft in a web site.
I did this project because it was an assignment of language arts. I chose to do the final draft in a website because I liked that option better.
First I reaserched some reasons evidence and made a roughdraft. I made a website made my final copy and put some picturesÂ
My result was that I was correct and public transportation needs to get better. And also ai got a good grade.
My results are important because if the do better public transportation it will help a lot of people. Also this improved my grade.
I could add some more pictures. I could also add more reasons.
I got references from google . And Mr Herron helped me.
You did a great job with your essay! I liked how you talked about the problems with public transportation in Paraguay and supported your ideas with facts from reliable sources. It's impressive how you did your research like a scientist! Maybe next time, you can think of ways to make transportation better. Keep up the good work!